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December 11, 2008
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Dec 6, 2008, 2:56:36 AM
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Nearly wore out the shutter firing of shots of this when visiting a student I have been working with in Umlazi, South Africa's second largest township.

Advanced critique encouraged, I really do take all comments on board so please help me out.

More pics from the day on my blog [link]
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~CrAZy-OvER-AnImE Dec 11, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:aww: Putting the boy together with the dog was a good idea!

Critique: You're logoo should be off in the bottom or top part. I think putting it on the stairs is a little rough looking. Also, the picture looks SLIGHTLY (very slightly, I mean) titled. And possibly next time, have the boy just barley catch sight of the camera or see it out of the corner of his eye.
I say that becuase when the dog looks directly at it, attention is spun towards the dog.

Hope I haved helped in any critique areas! :D

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thanks 4 the feedback, dunno why I only just noticed it....

I had this image up somewhere else in a very large size where it could be easily stolen which is why the logo is placed in such an obvious position.

Thanks for all the other stuff, i wish i could tell the kid where to look, but you know what they say about children and animals....especially when you are doing it street style...

Catch you round and thanks again!

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~CrAZy-OvER-AnImE Mar 2, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
welcome ^^ Well, don't feel bad, I've ignored a message for a few months until I replied to it ^^;

I see.

Welcome! Yeah, but other than that, you're a good photographer!

Welcome :D

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"Clock: Forsooth! Thy ticking and thy tocking art now creating many things of which I cannot understand, henseforth! I shall never tick nor tock again!"
~CCrystal14
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