Nearly wore out the shutter firing of shots of this when visiting a student I have been working with in Umlazi, South Africa's second largest township.
Advanced critique encouraged, I really do take all comments on board so please help me out.
Putting the boy together with the dog was a good idea!
Critique: You're logoo should be off in the bottom or top part. I think putting it on the stairs is a little rough looking. Also, the picture looks SLIGHTLY (very slightly, I mean) titled. And possibly next time, have the boy just barley catch sight of the camera or see it out of the corner of his eye. I say that becuase when the dog looks directly at it, attention is spun towards the dog.
Hope I haved helped in any critique areas!
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"Clock: Forsooth! Thy ticking and thy tocking art now creating many things of which I cannot understand, henseforth! I shall never tick nor tock again!" ~CCrystal14
thanks 4 the feedback, dunno why I only just noticed it....
I had this image up somewhere else in a very large size where it could be easily stolen which is why the logo is placed in such an obvious position.
Thanks for all the other stuff, i wish i could tell the kid where to look, but you know what they say about children and animals....especially when you are doing it street style...
welcome ^^ Well, don't feel bad, I've ignored a message for a few months until I replied to it
I see.
Welcome! Yeah, but other than that, you're a good photographer!
Welcome
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"Clock: Forsooth! Thy ticking and thy tocking art now creating many things of which I cannot understand, henseforth! I shall never tick nor tock again!" ~CCrystal14
Critique: You're logoo should be off in the bottom or top part. I think putting it on the stairs is a little rough looking. Also, the picture looks SLIGHTLY (very slightly, I mean) titled. And possibly next time, have the boy just barley catch sight of the camera or see it out of the corner of his eye.
I say that becuase when the dog looks directly at it, attention is spun towards the dog.
Hope I haved helped in any critique areas!
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"Clock: Forsooth! Thy ticking and thy tocking art now creating many things of which I cannot understand, henseforth! I shall never tick nor tock again!"
~CCrystal14
I had this image up somewhere else in a very large size where it could be easily stolen which is why the logo is placed in such an obvious position.
Thanks for all the other stuff, i wish i could tell the kid where to look, but you know what they say about children and animals....especially when you are doing it street style...
Catch you round and thanks again!
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Checkout my latest - 'Anti-Gravity' [link]
I see.
Welcome! Yeah, but other than that, you're a good photographer!
Welcome
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"Clock: Forsooth! Thy ticking and thy tocking art now creating many things of which I cannot understand, henseforth! I shall never tick nor tock again!"
~CCrystal14